September 30, 2016

literary response

Here are some ways Melody changed in the story. For instance, Melody was tired of the kids ignoring her like she was a ghost. “I’ve never ever been included in anything.” Another way Melody changed in the story is she makes a friend named Rose. “”Friends” i typed friends she answers with out hesitation she says friends”. She no longer feels like a fish out of water. Melody also changed in the story because she gets a mdedi talker. “Hi Dad Hi mom.I am so happy.” Mom was as happy as a hyena.These are multiple ways the main character changed in  the story.

September 14, 2016

sharon Draper’s book

This is the things i like about sharon draper’s writing. I like that the author is VERY descriptive. “Doctors where do i start doctors realy dont get me moms a nurse so i guess she speaks there language” -because she is very descriptive of the doctors.I also like how the author creates imagery i pointed at the blocks ,mom said no you dont need those i pointed again and screeched and kicked my legs-because you can see that happening in real life.I love how the author hooks the reader draper dose this in the quote “step fart i’d be laughing by the time he got to my room”she hooks the reader by makeing the reader laugh.Here is something i like about he author.